PDA

View Full Version : Poor lady...


theincredibleandy
February 13th, 2003, 01:46 PM
This was an editorial piece supplementing text about how patients in hospitals are being treated improperly, a school project. It's finished (kinda), but I welcome any feedback, especially harsh but constructive stuff.



http://www.geocities.com/almillustration/medtreatment.jpg

If the image isn't showing up, it's the first thumbnail on my website:

www.geocities.com/almillustration (http://www.geocities.com/almillustration)

Thanks!

I.was.ink
February 13th, 2003, 01:57 PM
I like that opening picture...well the bottom half anyways. IMO. there are too many undefined edges through out the piece, especially on the uppergalf. But it seems to me that those are easily fixed and....presto! A finished piece.

My fave on your site is the email painting, with the girl thats on the phone. Great concept and excellent execution!:)

O

Yaseck
February 13th, 2003, 07:15 PM
Push the IMG button, type in the pop-up window the url of the image, f.e.: http://www.somewhere.com/my/pic.jpg than click OK and that's it.

Anyway, I like your style. Nice stuff you've got there.