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jar
February 11th, 2003, 01:00 PM
Hello peoples! Heard of this place from a pal. Anyways, I thought I would throw up some of my newest stuff for you all to see...let me hear it! Rip it up! Critic it all to hell :) thankos!

http://jar.resnorm.org/lady_ifrit.jpg

http://jar.resnorm.org/gememini.jpg
davi
February 11th, 2003, 01:59 PM
Awesome style you got going here. The second piece reminds me of jojo's bizare adventures where people have an alter form they can fight with.
The first one isa little too bright for me to even look at for longer than a feel seconds :\
soupface
February 11th, 2003, 02:30 PM
i like them both, very strange.

the first one:
her tentacle-like 'hair' is very cool. i dislike the blurred effect over whatever she's holding in her hand. it looks like whomever painted it just got frustrated. there are also some funny anatomy (under her outstetched arm) and perspective (eyes on helmet).
still, cool lookin' stuff.

second one:
i dunno if i understand their hands. nicely coloured and drawn, as well as being a cool idea.

great stuff jar.
Fozzybar
February 11th, 2003, 04:40 PM
Wow...nice style going there...but i don't like the backgrounds...i think your drawings deserve better backgrounds. Ones which imbed the figures better...
ghobii
February 11th, 2003, 08:58 PM
I hate when the smudge tool looks like the smudge tool.
Darkness
February 12th, 2003, 12:58 AM
The idea of the second one is pretty good.

The way they are being separated/united is great!
MindCandyMan
February 12th, 2003, 08:29 AM
Your line work is really good...great stuff man.
jar
February 12th, 2003, 12:18 PM
davi - Thanks! Sorry about the brightness :) She is Lady Ifrit though :P

soupface - Yeah...I posted this on the Eatpoo! forums, and they all agreed, I screwed up the blur effect...thought it looked cool personally, but the public disagrees :D HA!

Fozzybar - Thankos Muchos! I agree...i'm personally in a stage of art where i'm wroking on better developing my backgrounds.

ghobii - Agreed.

Darkness - Thanks! Very much appreciated!

MindCandyMan - Wow. I've had plenty peoples telling me my line work is terrible..lol, thank you for correcting most :D

Thankyou too everyone whom responded, hopefully I will one day be able to do the same for you! Much love!
Zeravla
February 12th, 2003, 12:43 PM
very nice style :)
usagi yojimbo
February 12th, 2003, 02:29 PM
heh, the first one has 2 left feet

awesome, i like how how intense your backgrounds are, not to mention the line art, colouring and everything else