Critique my Portfolio

[Samael]

Please? Be ruthless.

Thusfar, the main concerns have been regarding the second sketch page (primarily, the figure that is leaning too far forward over his centre of gravity and the Wolverine/Punisher sketc).

My Portfolio (in progress) (http://photobucket.com/albums/v64/verezzi/Portfolio/)

[nafa]

What is the significance of sketch page 7 (layout 4)?

The hands in page 3 (hands.jpg) look gaunt/twisted.

[egerie]

Be careful with your perspective. Figures are your strengh but push your location drawings. And try to check this out too. (http://www.conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=34191)

[Samael]

Layout #4 is an underlay, or more specificaly, it's Batman's cape; and has to be animated on a seperate level from his body because the chair seperates the two.

I've been trying to think of an appealing way to present the layout portion of the portfolio, but thusfar I can only imagine printing it out on acetate sheets.

Thanks for the thread link!

I'll keep that in mind, and perhaps I'll put in some of my Asterix and Obelix layouts - they've got some nice perspective, and I created them from supplied thumbnails (the only problem is, I didn't do the clean-up, so I've only got the original copy in blue col-erase...and I want to get this out before the end of the month).