Neon Sky - Early Key. Feedback please

[Groady]

This is an early "colour key" for an illustration I'm working on for a friends short story. The story is set in a futuristic 'cyber punk' world under an enormous dome where air is controlled by a mega corporation. Her name is Aurora and is one of two main characters in the story. She is an assassin (one of the good guys). This is an illustration of her introductory scence in the story set in a seedy nightspot. I still need to put a symbolic pattern on her suit and put dancers behind the half-wall.

Just looking for any early feedback on composition and anything that stands out... cheers.


http://www.fatarts.com/nskey.jpg