Scene 1

[notbillbixby]

Hello all!

Its been a while...

This Illustration is part of a project I'm workin' on (illustrations for a soon to be published novel). It turns out that I got the guys outfit wrong so its back to the drawing board for me. But I still thought you guys would like to see where I'm at.


http://www.outcaststudios.com/gallery/13/scene1.jpg

[Marie]

Thats very nice, its a shame you have to do it over. I think you conveyed body language very well in this too, not to mention the expressions on their faces :)

Something else, its clear, very readable!

The only crit I can think of is the guy in the foregrounds wrinkled pants. It almost looks like mummy wrappings or that he's wearing some very thin material for it to wrinkle so much. (It took me a while to see that though... not sure how big of a deal it is)

I'd love to see the reworked one too, inkwork isn't one of my talents, so I have a lot of respect for it done well.