Lilith WIP

[Dirty C]

Hi guys.

What do you think I need to do to get this finished? I'm a bit worried that the textures are too much and it's a bit messy. Watchu think?

http://toeslikefingers.com/gallery/lilith.jpg

[shortmikeshort]

I like it so far. I might tone down the lighting on her hands and feet, because they seem very harsh compared to the rest of the image. But the texturing looks great, but I see what you mean where some areas are a bit undefined, like the bottom of her pant leg. The anatomy is spot-on and that face has such character. I wonder if you're going to leave the eyes that milky color- I think they look good that way.

[Badger]

I really like it... apart from... those things at the back, they seem out of style with the rest and draw your eyes off the figure too much IMO.
-Badger-

[lowpolymatt]

I think this is great Dirty C. The one thing I'd say is she kinda falls into the background a lot particularly around her head. You might want to pull her out from that a bit by darkening the wall behind her or lightening it up right now theres no contrast between the two. Good stuff there chappie, keep it up!

[Dirty C]

mike, badger, lowpolymatata - cheers guys - i've made changes based on what you all said - better?

[Aly Fell]

She's pretty intense, as Lilith should be. Wasn't she the first wife of Adam, the 'spectre of the night'? I like it... It does get a little confusing texture wise in places, however I think the eye allows for this. She also seems to be floating a little although that could be my monitor... But a very cool image! :) Looking forward to it's development...

[Dirty C]

You know Poshspice, after you married david Beckham and your career became one long propagandathon, you've got a pretty bad ride in the press. But you're all right.

Wanna fuck?

[Dirty C]

Oh, and yes, *that* Lilith :D

[young paddy1]

I go along with what my Posh says about the floating, but there is also a patch of light/texture by her knee that is very distracting, and the glow by her bum

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v19/youngpaddy1/dirtyclilith.jpg

tiniest of overpaints

[Dirty C]

awright peeps, fastly repainted.. see original post. better?

[Badger]

Yeah that’s looking amazing!!
Only thing, I don’t think its a criticism, more a question of composition, but that blue on the right, could you carry it around a bit more, it seems to be the only blue in the piece, only other thing is possibly the shadow on her brow?
aaah, never mind, tiny little things, its brilliant... So very intense
-Badger-

[Rhaucan]

Can somebody explain who lillith was? also what was this for DC? Sorry I can't really come up with any criticisms. The only thing is that the bumpy wall behind her head looks a little complicated or maybe out of place, but its nothing really damages this image. I really love the golden texture on her face though, the colours are much more interesting than just fleshtones. The look of despair is well... haunting :)

[Aly Fell]

Wanna fuck?
Sure! David's in Madrid this week, so I'm up for it. I'll need a baby sitter... maybe that nice Rebecca whats-her-name is free...:wink:

[Gaussian3d]

I like that style man, very dirty and kinda loose

[AdamBlack]

I really dig this. Not too pretty; not too ugly. Not too light; not too dark...you get the picture.

I especially like her eyes.

[Dirty C]

why thank you adamblack. now if i could just stay sober for five minutes, i could start work on something else.