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[Jens]

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[cucaracha]

comic style is always hard to criticize

but you should spend more time on that loreal girl's hair :)
it looks too sketchy

e: oh, and i like that duck :D

[StephenC]

you're not really doing anything wrong....it just takes time to gain expierience and knowledge....keep drawing...push yourself....if you think drawing 20 sketches is a lot and good for one day then instead do 50...and after that 100...and keep studying and as always ...draw from life...