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dr01d
November 24th, 2004, 03:37 AM
Ok I'm putting these in reverse order

max-cant
November 24th, 2004, 05:23 AM
haha - thats cool - should stick the pick up not the link -
just use imageshack or summin.

nice line work -
i like the "smooth" ended cross - it looks like a "massager"

ha ha.
good stuff.
colour please

dr01d
November 24th, 2004, 08:51 AM
thanks max, i'll post the image now, hopefully i should get it coloured by monday :nohope: goddbye weekend >:{

bekay
November 24th, 2004, 09:03 AM
Hi

Great as usual.... quite a nice sandwich you got there.
couple of things though.....the right hand of the girl on top(with the gun) is abit twisted....the foot that is further away from us of the girl underneath is larger than the one that is closer to us(should be the other way around)

other than that great detail and position .... gotta love the boobies!!

keep it up (: .... the work ,yes.

want to seeit coloured

Hamsta
November 24th, 2004, 09:47 AM
I see lot's of black and white, a little red, and fleshtones for the girl's skin. Is that good advice?
I think you have shocking proportion (or lack of it) pitiful forshortening and overuse of bodage as reference. :tihi:
It seems like overly long legs are a theme for you, especially those behind other things.
I'm also getting an "I've seen this before" feeling, where as "this looks like something new using the same technique" feeling would be better, but feelings are tough to define, ya'know? :shrug:

Oh, and I like the smoke, looks like graffiti

dr01d
November 24th, 2004, 09:57 AM
bekay - thanks, i think i can actually still scale the foot down a bit. ill do that tonight when i clean up the line art.

Hamsta, do you mean you get a seen this before feeling, as in it looks like the rest of my stuff, if so that the kind of angle im going in, finding what im good at and sticking to it and all that. and yeah, the smoke is a bitch to work with, i find it actually comes out better if I redraw it in adbobe illustrator and make it flatter.

and mayby ill still stick in the flag! lol!

evening all.

Dro
November 24th, 2004, 09:59 AM
I just took a look at your site, great stuff there. I really liked your sketch books.
Anyways on this one I really dig the faces of both the girls, and the detailing is wicked.

Is that a giant battery or a column of C4 strapped to the bottom girls leg!? Ive been trying to figure that one out.

bekay
November 24th, 2004, 10:11 AM
CLOUR.....COLOUR.....COLOUR.....(chanting)

Dro - i think its a battery for the cross

Droid - the obvious choice would be black red grey and white.....maybe go the other way and fill it with orange green blue.... i dont know really just rambling

dr01d
November 24th, 2004, 10:29 AM
Dro - it's the battery pack for the multi headed-cross-shaped massager.

Bekay - patience... is somthing not evan i have. SOON!!!!!

Dro
November 24th, 2004, 10:47 AM
dro1d-I honestly figured that, but I wont lie it still gave me a chuckle, esp. with the bondage theme....now that is a very concrete method of submission!

young paddy1
November 24th, 2004, 10:54 AM
great picture as always, love your stuff but I am a twisted little perv :wink: , so what d'ya expect, only thing I don't like is the riding crop looking thinng witht the imperial eagle on it, it steps to the right as it passes behind the arm and booby.

dr01d
November 24th, 2004, 10:56 AM
dro1d-I honestly figured that, but I wont lie it still gave me a chuckle, esp. with the bondage theme....now that is a very concrete method of submission!

lol, you'll notice that while there are 2 power cables, theres only one visible massager (CONSPIRACY)

dr01d
November 24th, 2004, 10:59 AM
great picture as always, love your stuff but I am a twisted little perv :wink: , so what d'ya expect, only thing I don't like is the riding crop looking thinng witht the imperial eagle on it, it steps to the right as it passes behind the arm and booby.

dammit your right, I'll just have it pass in front of her arm, in the next ver. WHATWASITHINKING :frustrated:

Hamsta
November 24th, 2004, 11:46 AM
Actually my reply was probably because of what my illustration teacher said, about some artists having a bigger octave than others, but how those who have a more limited octave use it to greater effect, making something appear new despite their use of only a few accords... I'm clueless about music, so I have no idea what I just wrote... ditto for the earlier reply... :dur:

Oh, it seems they are both enjoying the "missing" vibrator due to it's unique shape... :perv:

Molly
November 24th, 2004, 12:12 PM
Hey dr01d

My only crit for this piece is to watch your proportions (not the breasts, thats to be expected of you ;) , its your style) What I mean most is the females heads, especially the nun lying down on the floor. Her head is tiny, and mis-matches the rest of her body.

I am familiar with your style dude, Kim Taylor directed me to you, I like the Shirow thang you got here, but seriously, with the anime style your going for try and match the proportions of the bodies, that way they wont look so off. Both characters are fairly meaty, so adjust the heads is all I'ma saying:)

Anyway, nice composition there with the figures too...
- hehe hey Hamsta, I dont think these two want a vibrator...


Mollyx

Xpose
November 24th, 2004, 01:07 PM
Thats pretty ill man. Should look pretty kick ass once colored!

General Grevious
November 24th, 2004, 01:41 PM
Thats wicked man, nice one.

dr01d
November 25th, 2004, 02:52 AM
molly - thanks for the comments. "What I mean most is the females heads" I know, It's because I tend to work on A2 to fit all the detail on, so my perspective is too relyant on guide lines, I actually tried to compensate for the perspective of the page when I started, but when i was drawing, it ended up looking too big, so I stupidly went against past experience and made the head smalle, maybe i was looking more at the 'habit' and not paying attention to the distaance between her mouth and eyes's, but you're totally right, proportion is currently my major weakpoint (excluding my preference of subject matter of courese ;) )

Xpose + General Grevious - thanks too!

dr01d
November 26th, 2004, 03:38 AM
fuck! I finished the lineart last night but i forgot to bring my HDD in to work!!!!! sorry, I'll post it up with the (hopefully) completed colours on Monday! :yayca:

max-cant
November 26th, 2004, 05:50 AM
ive been coming back to check this out onand off
and theres one tiny niggling thing that thorws it for me

that sounds really picky and isnt meant as criticism because clearly this a really peice of work - clap clap

but the top girls jaw line on the right side looks weird - i d miror the hard edge on the left - the curve just draws my eye away now - i think thats a tiny point granted - but when you put this juch effort into a thing you do get small stuff back because everything else is fine i guess.

i got so sick of soprting details on the german sniper girl pick i finished last week or whenever - i just left it - im thinking though now i might go back and slogg through one more round with it and fix it once and for all.....


good stuff man - ill have to swing by your site -
(im planning a v1 rocket pack for an add on to one of mine just now - sssh its secret done tell anyone though :-)


maxcant

dr01d
November 26th, 2004, 06:21 AM
Max-Cant - no problem dude I see what your saying, I'll definatley fix that, seriously though this is why im posting this thing here, I've been looking at it so long that i need fresh eyes to find the faults for me, I hate doing my own proof-reading ;)

max-cant
November 26th, 2004, 07:34 AM
true dat man -

is anything ever really finished - ?
whos t say

i hate trying to decide when to quit,that and taking socks out the washin machine - both tedious.
i made the mistake of trying the "look at it in a mirror " way of proofing somthing.
to hell with that.
i used to have an ss tank driver action man as a kid - and wed put the cap etc on my mates sisters barbie - and she'd cry - and wed laugh.
thats life though isnt it :-)

m

dr01d
November 30th, 2004, 01:23 AM
max- well i hope tis one gets finished, i was sick this weekend so i didnt have time to finish the colours, I did however have a chance to start on them ;0 hope you like !

bekay
November 30th, 2004, 03:29 AM
Hi
Been waiting for the colours and you havent dissapointed at all!!
The bright pink really stands out .... I think that the hair colour
of the girl on top should maybe be red or blond or black...something with a contrast to the other colours in the pic.

keep up the great work

AndyLC
November 30th, 2004, 06:57 PM
You know, you're already showing a Nun being violated

why not leave the Swaztika on the Nazi chick?

Oh, hey, are you familiar with 40's-60's Men's adventure magazines? Look for the book 'It's a Man's world'. I think you'd like it. Lots of Nazi girl bondage. Commie girl bondage, amazon girl bondage, Fidel Castro bondage, etc.

Krakler
November 30th, 2004, 11:52 PM
Very good, they're breasts look like they're made of glass... O.O not that that's a bad thing :bashful: excellent work

darth massacre
December 1st, 2004, 12:35 AM
Whoa there....this is some extreme cosplay shit!


I LOVE IT!

Look at the detail of those lacy clothes.

I like the stylization. Maybe you would want to consider the ankle and feet of the nun the next time around....it seems like its a little...err...distorted....like the shape of the feet would look fine if she were wearing those insane high heel boots....but errr.....without footwear the feet may be more...err...relaxed?


Well if she's "flexing" to "cum" then all arguments are off. :bashful:

dr01d
December 1st, 2004, 12:37 AM
bk - ill try that out

AndyLC - yeah you'r probably right, that way if people have issues around the nudity or 'cough' sitution :perv: I'll say "WELL WHAT ABOUT THE SWASTIKA? ARE TITS WORSE THAN THE 3RD REICH! YOU CONSERVATIVE DOUCHE!"
and that makes me happier than anything :confident as for 'It's a Man's world'
i think I saw that on the bud plant catalougue , If it come reccomended I'll be sure to add it to my list ;)

Krakler - yeah i'm using less colour dodge and more screen recently, i was actually going for a 'wet' look, but it seems to have backfired a bit. either way im not too unhappy with the rresults. I'll just have to find time to finish it now!

Darth - now you're thinking ;)

TIO_MATT
December 5th, 2004, 06:06 AM
Really nice stuff, really like the anatomy and poses, nice style.

;)

Hamsta
December 5th, 2004, 09:50 AM
Well the nun does'nt have an "I'm cumming!" kind of face. Then again all of my experience comes from pr0n so what would I know...

I always so the vibrator as white, with maybe a secondary color, but this fuschia is too much of an attention grabber I think. Can I persuade to make it more mute? :eyeloss:

dr01d
December 6th, 2004, 12:28 AM
Well the nun does'nt have an "I'm cumming!" kind of face. Then again all of my experience comes from pr0n so what would I know...

I always so the vibrator as white, with maybe a secondary color, but this fuschia is too much of an attention grabber I think. Can I persuade to make it more mute? :eyeloss:

well i was trying to make it stick out, but with a backgound im sure i can change it to white ;)

Sterlingcrispin
December 6th, 2004, 01:27 AM
the nipples are just ... such a gimmick .. at least thats how i feel.

they cheapen it,

for me at least

but hey thats your style, its well done anyway

dr01d
December 6th, 2004, 02:10 AM
the nipples are just ... such a gimmick .. at least thats how i feel.

they cheapen it,

for me at least

but hey thats your style, its well done anyway

but nipples are so... rad :)

Warhead82
December 6th, 2004, 02:26 AM
Can breasts really be that big...

Your a pimp!

This is great work. :D keep it coming.

dr01d
December 6th, 2004, 02:34 AM
Can breasts really be that big...



tahts why i draw them, if they were like that in real life i'd just photograph them (or die trying)

dadamafia
December 7th, 2004, 06:07 PM
wow..just wow