Wizards Cave

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Hey Guys, here is environment painting i just finished. Had a lot of fun doing it. It's a concept painitng
C & C welcome & appreciated

http://www.artwanted.com/images/large/7518_136388.gif

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Keywords; depth, focal point, strokes, variation, colors, composition.
The pic has no focal point, i.e. nothing to draw the eye in particular.
Depth-wise it appears to be flat.
That happens because your colors lack variation, (very limited pallete), compositionally it is very centered, everything is drawn with the same line quality (so the foreground is just as clear as backgound = depth killer).
It's a nice concept, but execution is not quite there yet.
Try playing around with it and see what come out.

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Yutani- Thanks for the crits. I see what your saying, and your crits gave me a kick ass idea. I asked myself why dind't i do it before, but sometimes you need a fresh pair of eyes. Thanks dude.
I'll post it as soon as i'm done.