View Full Version : Warrior Women Sketches
kfisher
February 5th, 2003, 11:47 PM
This is my first posted sketch on this board. More to come soon.
Comments / Criticism are welcome.
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K. Fisher
http://www.aimcomm.com/kelly/swordgirl2.jpg
I.was.ink
February 6th, 2003, 12:37 AM
I really like the pose, but my only crit is that it doesn't really resemble a woman. Look at some anatomy books that explain what the differences are between a man and a woman's facial features. The muscles in here arms IMO need to be less defined because it makes her look to manly and not feminine enough.
Another little thing that confuses me is that club! I think the perspective is off a bit.
I hope these suggestions helped.:)
kfisher
February 6th, 2003, 04:47 PM
Thanks! I agree about the muscles in her arms. I was trying to define the muscles underneath to make sure the arms were the right shape, but in doing so, I brought them out too much. As for the club, I'm not sure what i was doing there.. :D I've since replaced it with a correctly perspectived sword hilt that I think looks a little better.. (see below) There is some PS shading there too now...
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K. Fisher
http://www.aimcomm.com/kelly/swordgirl.jpg
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