i am a victim

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even if i know nobody reply this thread...

here is my last shot

http://digilander.libero.it/stebo78/victim_001.jpg

enjoy!!!

[haiku]

Wow well done, you really got me into the piece the way you did it really let's you feel confused, the colors and the writing the perspective... me likes.


haiku

[Pavel Sokov]

hey i really like this one a lot, but i wish u didnt put the writing on the guy himself

[||STEBO||]

well, 2 replies, thaat's reeeally gooooooood...

[Fozzybar]

Yeah...and it's even better when you don't reply to the replies you got...i'll never understand this kind of people... :nohope:

[||STEBO||]

Yeah...and it's even better when you don't reply to the replies you got...i'll never understand this kind of people... :nohope:

well my english is not so good so i can't understand what u really want to say...

maybe u want to say that i'm wrong replying other's messages or that i'm wrong just replying to keeping up my thread [in this way u r wrong...]...

the only thing i would is to receive costructive crits and comments... i don't mind messages like "that's good" etc...

so your reply is unusefull too... you could send me a private message... and, first of all, u colud leave a comment or a crit with your message but maybe i'm not as good to catch your attention

[Duncan]

I like it when whoever started a thread has enough interest in it themself to post replies. Otherwise why should I?

My critique of the first piece is it's a little flat. I think that the writing over the entire piece does this plus it shouts the message a little too loudly. That may just be me prefering the subtle. There could also stand to be a little more contrast in the foreground and background. I really like the composition though, how it being upside down unnerves the viewer. I like the second one better though technique-wise. There's potential, keep at it!

[||STEBO||]

I like it when whoever started a thread has enough interest in it themself to post replies. Otherwise why should I?

well in this community it's real difficult because there are a lot of people and tons of thread... often, very often i avoid starting a new thread with a new piece just cause i know a lot of people will look at the post and don't reply... i don't start a thread cause i want people to tell me i'm good but cause i'd like to know how i can do better things...

anyway

My critique of the first piece is it's a little flat. I think that the writing over the entire piece does this plus it shouts the message a little too loudly. That may just be me prefering the subtle. There could also stand to be a little more contrast in the foreground and background. I really like the composition though, how it being upside down unnerves the viewer. I like the second one better though technique-wise. There's potential, keep at it!


thanks a lot for the crit... the writing is desired just to "shout it out loud"... i'm glad the composition unnerves the viewer: this was the first thing i thought to ;)

tnaks again, see ya :D

[Fozzybar]

What i wanted to say:

You complain about too less replies...but you even didn't answer to the two kind guys who replied to your image...i personally prefer people in communities who take their time to give answers to the members who replied to the threadstarters image...

For example manslauter stated his opinion that he thinks the writing doesn't work well on the person...your reaction was "well, 2 replies, thaat's reeeally gooooooood..."....now what is maslauter supposed to do with your reply??? I would never post again a comment or crit to any of your coming posts, when i would read such a "reaction" to my reply...

So, basically what i mean is, just don't complain about too less replies when you don't appreciate them!!! So many people complain about not getting much attention or replies...and when someone replies to their threads the only thing they say is "well, 2 replies, thaat's reeeally gooooooood..."... :perv:

[||STEBO||]

What i wanted to say:

You complain about too less replies...but you even didn't answer to the two kind guys who replied to your image...i personally prefer people in communities who take their time to give answers to the members who replied to the threadstarters image...

For example manslauter stated his opinion that he thinks the writing doesn't work well on the person...your reaction was "well, 2 replies, thaat's reeeally gooooooood..."....now what is maslauter supposed to do with your reply??? I would never post again a comment or crit to any of your coming posts, when i would read such a "reaction" to my reply...

So, basically what i mean is, just don't complain about too less replies when you don't appreciate them!!! So many people complain about not getting much attention or replies...and when someone replies to their threads the only thing they say is "well, 2 replies, thaat's reeeally gooooooood..."... :perv:


now i understand and i can say u r right.
but! in a lot of my past thread, maybe i think in 99.9% of them i replied the replies... and if u look at the threads i started u'll notice that many of them are unreplied... with tons of viewing...

that's all...

it doesn't make i don't agree with u ;)

[Fozzybar]

now i understand and i can say u r right.
but! in a lot of my past thread, maybe i think in 99.9% of them i replied the replies... and if u look at the threads i started u'll notice that many of them are unreplied... with tons of viewing...

Ok, it could be, i just referred to this thread...but i think what i said is a common problem and maybe doesn't apply to your overall threads...

However....things are cleared up now :confident