My Daughter

[Drawnblud]

:D
I'm working on a t-shirt design and I need some feedback. I don't usually draw charactatures, so I need to know if this looks okay. I've included the sketch with some ref pictures.
http://www.drawnblud.com/stuff/dakotadrawing.jpg
and the Refs
http://www.drawnblud.com/stuff/dakota1.jpg
http://www.drawnblud.com/stuff/Sep30_48.JPG
Any help will do! Thanks!!

[MindCandyMan]

Even though it's a caricature I still think the head is a bit too big. I think it would be more effective if the head was dropped down in size a bit. The pose and all looks great though...although the perspective on her two feet seems a little off...not sure what it is but the perspective on her legs and feet is a little warped. Your daughter is cute :)

[jester]

Give the caricature more hair and make the features a bit smaller (eyes and mouth) but leave the head size - that's my advice and what I would try.

Jester