character: angel

[misledtomisery]

http://misledtomisery.com/images/angel2%20copy2.jpg


please please i need feedback. this was my 3rd digital painting using only photoshop on my scanned inks. any comments and critiques are greatly appreciated. thanks for your time. r.l. hunter

[goodidea]

I really liked the design and organization, wings are especially good. but there is an irrelavent color code between the parts.. the body , environment and the wings belong to different atmospheres. I think you should try darker background and more shadows on the wings to give the exact feeling.

[inspector Lee]

I agree, it almost looks like 2 seperate drawings. You have the very delicate, light value, low contrast wings and background and the very dark figure that looks like ink brush or something. The 2 styles aren't working very well together.

[misledtomisery]

thanks goodidea and inspector lee. i will play around with that some more. for sure. again thanks for the crits.

[/Anders]

i think what makes it overall appear odd is the ribcage, id got out and try to find an exact figure that is sitting like that and try to get the form from there.