7 of spades WIP(Update 11-20-04)

[yellowdragon]

Work in progress going to be lots more this is leaps and bounds better than anything else I have ever done. critiques would be very helpful. I am extraordinarily proud of this one.

http://yellowdragon.ntdi.net/7ofspades.jpg

[Chяis]

I doesn't really belong in the finished section but oh well. ;)

It looks good so far, cool concept and character, watch the eyes there not evened out and becareful when colouring it. :confident

[yellowdragon]

But its the helpful critique place. So it should have gone in the sketchbook then. I can never figure out where my pictures should go thanks for the tip btw.

[yellowdragon]

Hey guys I posted it in this section to get critics so I would still like some here is the spades on the flip side to allow you guys to critic it better. Tell me what you think. and tell me how to make it better so I can show you a finished version.
http://yellowdragon.ntdi.net/7ofspades2.jpg

[A D]

I think its pretty cool, except your hands look better than your faces, which isn't common.

[rothgar]

Design-wise it's nice that you didn't just mirror and flip to have the same on both sides. I think it helps that they both are just a bit unique. Ink it and let us see it then.

[ArifQazi]

Suggestion

Draw one half of it then invert flip on computer :)

[yellowdragon]

Cleaned them up and fixed them up a little.

Continue to critic away. I'm going to try and ink them soon but my inking skills are extradinarily mediorcer.(so are my spelling skills)

http://yellowdragon.ntdi.net/SpadesClean1.jpghttp://yellowdragon.ntdi.net/SpadesClean2.jpg