feel free to laugh

[guenter]

if only i was as good as some of you here. this was done for school. it took like 10 minutes to color
http://members.fortunecity.com/guenter/sitebuildercontent/sitebuilderpictures/guenter_test.copy.jpg

[Scotty]

Uuuuuuh, I like it. I don't see why I would laugh. :)
I'm not sure why I like it, but I do.

[Fozzybar]

Nothing to laugh about. Just stretch the upper part of her head, so that the eyes would be in the center...

[John P.]

No, I like this. :)

In my opinion though, you should also draw a little of her right ear. I know you probably meant the hair to cover it, but to me the face seems 'unbalanced' without it.

You can keep that hair to the right of the skull, just draw in the top of the ear above that thick strand of hair, you know?

I guess this is a subjective crit, but it would give it some balance, IMO. :)


I would also have liked to see a fully coloured version. Scan it in with a little different settings, or bring up the contrast in some image software, so you get rid of that scanner shadow, then colour her.

It works the way it is now too, I'd just like to see it fully coloured. :)


Again, a subjective crit... ;)

[guenter]

i think i will add part of her ear. i would also like to color it fully too. i just did it like this to turn it into my teacher as quickly as possible.