More Conceptart.org inspiration.......

[ColeNuckols]

thanks to a lot of artists around here (hardcore, marko, andrew, lung, and many many more) i think im finally starting to learn and develop my own style, not to mention a new found sense of confidence in my art.

thanks guys.....

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v56/belligergerum/page28.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v56/belligergerum/page29.jpg

thanks for looking..... i need all the crits i can get...... i think the group in the second one is a little unclear....

peace guys......LONG LIVE CONCEPTART.ORG!!!!!!!

[Diluc]

Hey,..

Nice drawings...

Let me tell you what I see...

1st pic left guy with knife: His Right Arm (the one holding the Knife) I think there´s a perspective issue and his shoulder is way too back creating the ilusion of a hunchback. Another thing,... I don´t know if that´s the idea, but it looks a little fat and by the position of his legs he will fall to the floor in any minute (so check balance).

1st pic right guy with gun: It looks good to me.

2nd pic single guy: There´s a cpl of things here, the most noticeable is his helmet, it looks bend,... like it´s made of gum instead of metal, the second thing is his arms,... their position is weird... what is he trying to do? his left arm looks dead.

2nd pic Group... I think the group is fine...

Hope this helps...

Diluc

[ColeNuckols]

i agree, the guy on the first page has a funny angle, but i semi meant for it to look that. maybe it didnt work out so well....

as for the dude, most of the mask isnt metal, i was trying to go for a "softer" helmet maybe.....i dunno what that means.

thanks for the help.. i'll post some more