new life drawings

[mime]

i am sorry, i would post more if my crappy scanner wasnt broken, i dont know what is hapenning, it scans a little, then simply stops ... and i have to reboot the computer in order to be able to scan again .... so i only scanned 2 drawings

charcoal and pastel
http://erhnam.free.fr/pastelnu.jpg

graphite and white pencil
http://erhnam.free.fr/scan1.jpg


they are about 25 and 15 minuts i think

[Coma]

Nice work, your getting a lot better with proportion
Love the first one the most. Colors

Crits:

in the second drawing her right leg looks broken.
at the ankle and upper leg right above the knee.
Also the highlights on the body should match with the ones on the face.

[mime]

Thanxs coma

the second one was more of an experiment, less accuracy, more "on the fly" strokes, i had no ink pen with me, so i just tried to go with one only hard stroke with my pencil ...

as for the highlights on the body, at first i did not wanted to draw any, but i tried, and erased them, but white pencil does not erase well ..
i dont know, i thought that highlight on the face only could be interesting.