hello, I'm new

[Raquel]

Hello all! this is my first time posting here. I use the programs photo shop CS and painter 8. I enjoy painter using more than photoshop.


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v329/Frill_house/53.jpg

This is a character (Eva) from my comic which you can find....

here! (http://doctorpepper.keenspace.com/)

(She's not in it yet... but she will be ^___^)

[sjoerd]

alltough in dont really digg this style (dont worry nothing personal! ;)), I gotta say

HOORAY for the colers.

But, some things kinda bother me, lets start at the top:
Its supposed to be a highlight on her nose, but it kinda looks more like a shiny pimple (one more under her right eye). Here mouth is a bith "angeld" and her face isnt.
Her hands kinda look like candy wrappers.
Her right leg seems kinda dislocated around the hip area, and because u used forshortening there that can be corrected easily by just moving the lot a bit to the right (for us). And a little thing, when she wants to stand on her right legg again, she will get it stuck under her (shadowless) skirt, trip fall over, and most likely break het pretty face, that would be a shame. Why does she even wear digfferent colers pantys?

These are just little things and i think, i you would change those, youll have a killer babe.
Good luck!

[rodrigo!]

hey raquel welcome to the forums!

i agree with sjoerd the colours are great but there are still some structural issues that need to be addresssed,

hope you can post more :)