Golem type thingy..

[garg]

I have spent about 40 minutes of this guy... What do you think? http://thenetbox.com/34324copy.jpg

[Fozzybar]

I think, spend another 40 minutes and it will be fine :)


No, i think it's to blurry at the moment and has got too less details, as well as in your description about YOUR intentions...

[shin]

yes~~I agree with Fozzybar !!

[garg]

Thanks :)

I'll start making it clearer and more detailed now.. I will update this soon..

do the colors and shading look right?

[Fozzybar]

shading and colors are ok, maybe the background could be a little bit darker, so the golem gets more focus on it...but i think there is a different problem...maybe it's too late, but work over the proportions and the perspective of the golem.

Look at the lenght of the part between his shoulders and his head. They are really differing. The tires are drawn a little from the side, but the body itself is in front view, there are also unbalanced areas in his face.

You should first work out the composition and proportions and then get to the details...it's much easier for you later in the process of finishing the piece.

[OneBigCelt]

I think if you could establish a light source it would really help your peice and bring some depth into it