concept art ready to be painted

[Kadza Neon]

Hello, People.
Here are a few concepts I am working on.
Please tell me what you think, and any
advice you might have.

Thanks,
Neon

http://www.kadzaneon.freeservers.com/images/gio_art.jpg
http://www.kadzaneon.freeservers.com/images/color01.jpg IF PICS DONT SHOW HIT HERE PLEASE. (http://www.kadzaneon.freeservers.com/photo.html) :D

[jhibbs]

geez dunno why you dont have any replies yet, the line style is great, i also use the heavy primary contour. im not sure how i feel about the one-tone clolorjob though. also maybe some more detail on the characters, its great on the doves and building.

[Kadza Neon]

Thanks for your crit.
i will try to add more detail to the characters.
Thanks,
Neon:chug: