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allenatl
September 29th, 2004, 11:38 AM
Comic book hero style coloring. Unfinished but looking for any comments and critiques.
http://www.allen3d.com/star_flightcolor.jpg
dogfood
September 29th, 2004, 12:19 PM
This is really cool. One thing that I do a lot and don't realize until someone tells me: "That hand is proportioned, but what's it doing? It looks Goofy." I also think that her left leg is rotated inward a bit too much. It gives her an almost pigeon-toed look.
Cool costume, especially the half-glove effect.
Jarons20
September 29th, 2004, 01:47 PM
I love the boots and the shoulders, if you had a vis effect around the fingers they wouldn't look so funny, color scheme is very nice and the hair looks great
allenatl
September 29th, 2004, 02:36 PM
dogfood, Jarons20: Thanks for the critiques. I can't take credit for the boots. They're loosely based on boots I saw in the Underworld movie. As for the hand, the funny thing is that I had a glow effect partially hiding it in a layered Photoshop file. I didn't include it here because I wasn't satisfied with the results yet. I'll work on it though and post an update.
haiku
September 29th, 2004, 04:53 PM
Hey man it's a nice work, only thing is that her legs are kinda off, one leg seems shorter, and they are in a weird pose. Overall it's very cool i'd like to see it finished :)
allenatl
September 30th, 2004, 12:22 AM
Thanks, haiku. I changed the leg pose.
Update:
http://www.allen3d.com/star_flightcolor3.jpg
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