some knights?

[facezero]

hi~^^
I have a llttle works from game company.
it's creating card image.
so i made some image... like knight and monster.


http://facezero.com.ne.kr/swordmaster3.jpg
sword master
http://facezero.com.ne.kr/whiteknight2.jpg
whiteknight
http://facezero.com.ne.kr/holly.bmp
saint soldier

[davi]

that frist and third ones are awesome, i have a problem with the 2nd one cause it seems alittle too flat. Awesome work though. Keep it up!

[spawnie]

wow.so few replys?before it slips away-here are my 2 cents:i like the first one the most.realy nice muscles n shading.the swordmasters cape looks a little too soft like silk.maybe put more folds into it. for the whiteknight: his headform looks kinda strange to me n the bands on the shoulder in the front seem to shorten the shoulder n it seems like they are not lying directly on it.hope ya know what i mean:) and not to forget...wow!;)

[MolvaDo]

the first one is the swordmaster, the second is the white knight and the last is a saint soldier. he put the title of the pic below the pic.

i would have to agree that the first and third are the best of the three. The first one is really nice I like the mood, he looks like he just chopped off someone head and is busting a pose to intimidate the next to be decapitated. The only thing i don't understand is the furry boa looking thing around is neck. what is that.

the second i think is nice as well just he pose is a little boring. it is rendered well though

lastly the poor infantry saint soldier would look sharp with a bit more detailing such as you have done with the first.

great work

[I.was.ink]

I like them all. I'm sure I could find little things that really aren't worth mentioning. I like them all in general, but my fave is the first one, and I like that silk thing the second one has. Makes me wonder what it is.

[spawnie]

ooops!sorry.ya know what i´meant:p

[Prometheus|ANJ]

Kickass helmet on the top one. I made a paintover, hope u dun mind.

http://home.swipnet.se/zebes/eastern.jpg

Moved arms and made the sword more swordy. Removed some of the torso. Made skin grey so it contrasts a bit with the armour (just an interesting effect). Dabbed here and there. Darkened some highlights as there were a bit too many of them bouncing around.
Helmet is still a bit too small for his head.

[gallon]

The second knight's hand bothers me a bit. It looks awkvard. Maybe it's just to small, as if all the fingers don't have room.
I really like the way u render the metal. Looks very good.

And to Prometheus|ANJ, I like the paintover. I agree with you on the Jon Foster post, that paintovers show more than a thousand word, and are great fun to look at. I like your loose style.

[Travis_Bourbeau]

nice work only thing is it leaves me wanting to see whole characters or characters in a scene not that this is much of a crit more a request ;) nice work i think coloring armor is a very dificult task !

[facezero]

thanks for critiques and suggestions
im sorry that i couldn't answer every each of you
i will try to show you better one next time

[Yaseck]

I wonder why the first knight don't have an armour on his chest?.. Is he iron-muscle-man?

[facezero]

Originally posted by Yaseck
I wonder why the first knight don't have an armour on his chest?.. Is he iron-muscle-man?
yes~ I don't because game company's wish .