Tormentor

[evildisco]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v245/evildisc0/tormentorres.jpg
For bigger view go here:
http://www.deviantart.com/view/10651303/

C&c for future reference welcome.

[Matt Smith]

Some of the lighting seems to be off in parts, also try not to make the character so stiff looking, especially with the arm holding the sword, its like a straight line. Just keep practicing.

[evildisco]

Anyone else?

[dogfood]

The scabbard doesn't look to be part of this piece. It is unaffected by the objects which are supposedly around it.
The green does not reflect onto any of the other surfaces, nor does their color affect the marble wall. In fact, no color seems to affect any other surface, making the piece seem far too cartoon-ish, despite it's blended nature.
I don't know where the light is coming from.
She seems to be drooling.

On the other hand, that is a wicked-cool weapon handle and I immediately identified the marble.

['Fitz111']

Nice. The only thing that pops out at me that hasn't already been mentioned is that the top of the head seems a little flat.

The handle on that tool is pretty sweet.