Hedgehog Hacker (added a new pic)

[gallon]

Hi everyone!
This is a pic I made of a humanoid hedgehog female hacker (:))trying to activate a sleeping guard 'bot. The first CG pic I've done in grayscale.
Please give feedback.
http://w1.165.telia.com/~u16506462/forum/igelkott.jpg

(mmh, I have brightness 79 on my monitor. If you have a lower setting i imagine it could be rather dark.)

[kapturowski]

heya!

I think it looks great, maybe a bit to bright? I would darken it a bit, letting it just hint at the forms on the left side. love the rendering of the metal on the pecs!

[gallon]

I made this :).
Just as the hedgehog hacker this pic is inspired by an old Swedish RPG (1984 Mutant), a post-apocalyptic world with mutants and mutated animals.
This is a pic of settlers trying to find a new home, and they get attacked by bugs.
Second grayscale CG . Please gimme some crits, good or bad, as this is a style still in the making

http://w1.165.telia.com/~u16506462/forum/fulis.jpg

[gallon]

mmmh, 263 viewers and no replies, is there any red "X" or anything else wrong?

[AfroLaxMan]

don't stress the lack of c&c, sometimes people do, and sometimes people don't.

i dig the ideas, and i would consider putting in some more contrast to seperate the people from the sky (in the 2nd piece), and to snap the bugs in the foreground away from the the main character. looks too flat.