My sketches...

[OleOlsen]

hey everybody!
here are my crappy scetches....
maybe i get some helpful crit?!? :nohope:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v473/OleOlsen/anatomie1.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v473/OleOlsen/scetch3.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v473/OleOlsen/scetch1.jpg


ALARM!!! PHOTOBUCKET JUST KICKED MY PICS!!!! HAVE TO UPLOAD THEM AGAIN!!! DAMN! FOR NEW PICS JUST CHECK OUT THE BOTTOM OF THE PAGE!!
THX!

[O D T]

hi!
1st crit: you should put your links in "img-brackets", so they load with this page automaticly, and we dont have to open 5 new tabs/windows to see your work...
:dur:

2nd crit: you should watch your proportions...the humanoids are almost always a bit off...

I like the snake, nice detail!

cheers, ODT

[Delta 1]

ARE YOU CRAZY! THOSE ARE AWESOME! I think they are excellent, especially for sketches! Like ODT said, put those in IMG tags. I have no crits for those! I dont have enough athority to crit those! Up date as soon as you can, those are great!!!

[OleOlsen]

hey there...
no time to write anything, maybe later...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v473/OleOlsen/scetch5.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v473/OleOlsen/scetch4.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v473/OleOlsen/drache2.jpg

[OleOlsen]

thank you delta...
here are two more...i know there re also crappy ones, but i did them in short time and so on...
greetz
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v473/OleOlsen/sketch7.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v473/OleOlsen/sketch6.jpg

[OleOlsen]

some more stuff....maybe i need to do some more colored works...
i am a bit lazy...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v473/OleOlsen/sketch9.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v473/OleOlsen/sketch8.jpg

[OleOlsen]

hey here is some older stuff...the last two are inspired by "The MAXX"
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v473/OleOlsen/sketch11.jpg
wanted to fill that page..
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v473/OleOlsen/sketch10.jpg
this is maybe 3 months old
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v473/OleOlsen/junglequeenag.jpg
and this is maybe one and a half!
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v473/OleOlsen/THEMAXX.jpg

[Fipse]

Hi Ole,

first things first. Don´t tell us your stuff is crappy - this is like fishing for compliments and if you´ve looked around on the site you´ll see that there are many different levels of skill. Your stuff isn´t "crappy" at all. Of course it can need improvement but everyone is thinking this about his own stuff (if he´s in the right state of mind of course :rendered: ).

As the people before mentioned there are some issues with anatomy and a bit perspective - nothing really serious. If you don´t know it - and as I see you´re german, so you may can read it - I can recommend Bammes "Die Gestalt des Menschen" from Zweitausendeins (http://www.zweitausendeins.de/) . A really good one to get deep into the basics.

My personal favourite on this pages is the watercolour. I suppose it´s mostly because I like girls with reall feminine forms. Furthermore I think you´ve got a good sense in some of the designs of armour etc.

Anyway keep on posting and welcome to CA!

Fipse

[lowpolymatt]

I have to agree with Fipse...you have some very nice sketches here...

[O D T]

hey! thats mean!!! these arent the sketches I saw the 1st time I posted on this thread!!! These are much better than the ones I saw, though, and I dont know what you smoked on that day you posted the widehipped lady (3rd pic), or if it was on purpose, anyhow: great sketches, NO anatomy probs! but like I said: these arent the ones I 1st critted!

[OleOlsen]

hey thanks for the nice comment odt...
i swichted the scetches because i gave them a new link, first i posted them in a german online store ??? on you had to click that link to see them! ehh?! eh?! so i donT' know maybe i forgot the one i posted before, i will upload it again next time...
thanks fipse...i am already a proud owner of gottfried bammes great book..
and i have to agree, too that it's super <3 i soon post some scetches i made with it as reference...i won't call them crappy any more but i always feel that i have to get better...greetz to Kastrop-Prauxel
and lowpolymatt your scetches are just awsome good!

[OleOlsen]

so here is my next post...
i try to focus on faces in the next few days..cause i think i have to improve on that sector...
so here are two SP i am quiet satisfied with..i had a lot of tries in the past few days, and there were a lot of whack drawings..maybe i gonna to post some of them. pizza!!
and there are the two drawings i forgot to post after i edited my first post..
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v473/OleOlsen/SP1.jpg
i like this one, i made it with black chalk, i am always more loose...so i fucked up a little the nose.. :rolleyes:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v473/OleOlsen/SP2.jpg
those are the two from the first post...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v473/OleOlsen/bung1.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v473/OleOlsen/monkey.jpg

[OleOlsen]

oh and i forgot to post the snake...or maybe dragon! but just to pronounce it, i am not very happy with the last three... :\
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v473/OleOlsen/drache.jpg

[OleOlsen]

hey...a few new sketches today...at all im not doing more than sketching and doodeling in the last few days. i'm having problems of drawing different poses.
at the the moment i am feeling kind of stuck, me don't know whats up!
crits are heavily recommended...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v473/OleOlsen/sketch14.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v473/OleOlsen/sketch13.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v473/OleOlsen/scetch12.jpg

[OleOlsen]

hey here i am again...long time no post...ahh damn, photobucket just kicked out my old pics..damn it!
nevertheless i did something new that i want to post...
so here we go.
some sketches i made during having course:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v473/OleOlsen/stunde6.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v473/OleOlsen/stunde5.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v473/OleOlsen/stunde4.jpg
ahh!
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v473/OleOlsen/stunde3.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v473/OleOlsen/stunde2.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v473/OleOlsen/stunde1.jpg
this on eis a color sketch for a poster i am working on..for this one i spent maybe 2 hours.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v473/OleOlsen/Mermaid.jpg

some crits are welcome... :blahblah: