My recent sketchbook stuff

[Titan]

trying to sketch a little bit everyday, here are a few recent pieces from my sketchbook:

http://www.paullasalle.com/media_uploads/pigtails.jpg
http://www.paullasalle.com/media_uploads/holo_girl.jpg
http://www.paullasalle.com/media_uploads/emma.jpg
http://www.paullasalle.com/media_uploads/mayhem.jpg

[jzero]

Good stuff, homeslice! Keep working that Image/Shiro angle.

I like 'em all, esp. the holo-girl. She starts out like any other bikini-babe drawing, and the hardware at the bottom comes as a surprise. Her shoulder areas and upper arms seem to need some better definition, though, they look a little vague, shape-wise.

The first chick is obviously the best rendering, you've got all your forms well-defined, but finish her shoes!

The armor girl has good stuff going with the toned background, but I think it's too light, needs some better definition against the sketchy pencils. If you give it the contrast of strong tones against loose pencils, the result will be much stronger. I like her leg armor, nice 'knee-lugs'.

Fourth one, the armored tuffguy, good job working out the tech. All the nerny-forms are holding their own, and the mask draws your attention first, which it should. I'd say you should finish his weapon off and then take him into Photoshop, give him the Spinefinger treatment, work on the shading and pick out some highlights on all that metal gear.

And hey, post your comics work sometime!

/jzero

[Titan]

Man you rock, thank you for the critique.... stuff like that really helps me keep going...
I'll post my comics stuff as soon as I finish some neew material...
I'm trying desperately to get a new wacom at the moment...my other one died a terrible death...

[The Bry]

No real crits just wanna say you've got some great skills

[Titan]

thanks for the encouragement..:)
bought a new sketchpad today , this one was my first sketch..a bit cliche but it was fun to draw...

http://www.paullasalle.com/media_uploads/sketchgirl_1.jpg