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Leo Moraes
September 6th, 2004, 04:37 PM
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Hello Everybody,
Thatīs my very first post here.
I just finish this linedraw for my protfolio and I donīt know exactly what to do with the colors and values.
I would like to hear any critic or tip to help
=D

Thanks
Leo

bkdesign
September 6th, 2004, 09:19 PM
Great work on perspective, composition, expression, motion and line quality, but there is a lot that could be asked of the proportions. How much did you plan or research the pose and anatomy? It’s clear you've spent a lot of time and effort on this so my advice is with a little time taken planning you can achieve much more professional results. Its easier said than done I know. I'm always falling into the trap of drawing the picture properly before I've finished the planning stage. Like I said before though, it does have a lot of strong points, especially the expression.

Leo Moraes
September 6th, 2004, 11:08 PM
bkdesign: I will try to re-check her proportions... actually I was trying not to be so strict with this and go for a more expressionist style, but maybe I gone to far.

But I would like to know what mistakes on her anathomy tracked up your eyes.
What have you seen thatīs wrong? Maybe you can help me to see those details that I canīt right now.
=D

Thanks