Am I done with this one?

[teyekanik]

Ok.. went with the underwater... trying out under water but it's a struggle.. give me some crits on the environment please! Thanks for the comments so far too!


http://www.inkmafia.com/coppermine/albums/userpics/MarsWarrior%7E0.jpg

[no skillz]

Totally under da water!!!! that ginourmas (giantic plus enourmous equals ginormous) cannon would be horrible in space! you'd go flying from recoil!

i like it, its totally like cool!

[Wart]

Yeah man, stick him under water.

Oh, and it would be even cooler if you changed the gun to some gigantic harpoon rifle (it already kinda looks like one with the things sticking out on the front) and replaced the rocket pack on his back with a propeller like this (http://www.media.mit.edu/physics/pictures/99.07.sub.jpg) (the things sticking out from the sides), but thats just me.

One minor problem: his right arm (with the gun) seems to be out of perspective, it should be further back. Beyond that, way cool.

Oh yeah, and you need fish too. Wierd alien fish.

[teyekanik]

you fuckin got it wart.. thanks for the crits.. I am painfully aware of the perspective problems there.. haha

[Idiot Apathy]

Defiently underwater, Space is soooo... cliche heh :bashful: .

[Wart]

you fuckin got it wart.. thanks for the crits.. I am painfully aware of the perspective problems there.. haha

Sweeeet. Eagerly awaiting the finished piece.

[cateaic]

If hes gonna be underwater you should add a sick lookin harpoon on his gun. It looks like it needs something more. Great concept by the way.

[Xpose]

Very Awsome! I'd go with underwater. The perspective of the gun as pointed out could use some work but really good Job!

[teyekanik]

oh.. made the suit more of a red cuz those old diving suits had a similar color.. and I like lobster :) shit.. I forgot the alien fish wart.. workin on it! :needle:

[WildSpruceMoose]

I'd tone down that purple vegetation, as right now it is totally distracting my eye from the guy in the suit, other than that its looking pretty nice. I like the atmosphere it creates and the suit itself is cool. Realistic kind of "grunge mechanical", which I like.

[~FX~]

Spruce is right im not digging the purple seaweed or w/e you wanna call it.. but im digging the character.

[Hamsta]

I think there are too many bubbles, like so oxygen line broke, but he's way too cool for that.
Maybe make the water cloudier?
Do you have a working tablet yet? you've been bitching alot ;)

[~FX~]

I think there are too many bubbles, like so oxygen line broke, but he's way too cool for that


could be a jet propelled suit.. :bashful:

[Hamsta]

could be a jet propelled suit.. :bashful:
propelled down? I don't see any movement...

[Wart]

Nice man! I really like how this is turning out, can't think of any crits at the moment. Keep it up.

[Jens]

You could add more lights in the suit and have that reflect on his face.
like so: http://users.pandora.be/NO1/Jens/f.jpg

I don't think the color of the seaweed is working :)
the lights of the base are all very similar, you could make them a bit more random to make it more intresting.

The colors on the marine are too close to the background's, you could make them just a bit lighter. The guy's headlights can be lighter as well i think.

[teyekanik]

ok thanks.. I am working on it :)

Purple vggies are gone, I promise
My tablet is half way working.. I am painting from a little corner of the tablet that still responds.. If it happened to you you would bitch too ;)

I will work some of this stuff out.. thanks for the input!