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Aussie428
August 28th, 2004, 01:07 AM
http://nextthreat.networkoperations.us/upload/RWA_Property.jpg

draw your own conclusions... c&c appreciated

khrybro
August 1st, 2005, 03:44 AM
I love the concept behind this, what did you use to do it? Sorry if i sound kinda dumb but i havent really spoken much to other artists and im new on here

aprat
August 1st, 2005, 08:56 AM
The different resolutions clash.

jabberwookie
August 1st, 2005, 10:37 AM
it is an interesting concept, just the execution needs some work. while these are photos being manipulated, your soldiers has a stronger contrast to the flag which is making him 'pop' forward, while the flag is fuzzy and pixelated, so it looks like its further back which is causing confusion.

the background is rather bland and could use some attention, bulletholes, weathered walls, graffity, cracks, propeganda posters, just something to make it more interesting, while keeping your soldier sillouetted and the focus of your idea.

the skeleton is facing the same problem, and that black on the inside should be removed either completely, or fully filled in, not partially like it is now.

the typography is difficult to see, in fact I cant even really make out the "S" in U.S.A.

I would suggest something a bit bigger, maybe a differend color than the black?

the soldier seems to be standing in mid air which you can fix by the back ground, and adding a ground for him to stand on.

He is also off center a bit, i think it would be better on the eye if he was centered more. interesting idea.

Delta 1
August 2nd, 2005, 02:46 AM
I love it--but lsiten to them!