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SageGod
August 26th, 2004, 08:53 PM
Check me out, Daredevil.
Before we get stated I know the sky needs some clouds but besides that...
Crits and Comments.
http://www.johnscavella.com/Interface/Graphics/Daredevil.gif
t.m0
August 27th, 2004, 04:13 AM
...and the whole picture more contrast. I'd work on the buildings as well!
but in spite of that... nice pose and work on the character!
cheers.t
dr01d
August 27th, 2004, 04:52 AM
maybe a bit more deail, I really like the watercolour look, but it does look a little wased out, the anatomy is brilliant, i don't think you need to work on the charater, just the architecture.
tgfx
August 27th, 2004, 08:34 AM
I like it... I think its great.Better then Blade :er: .
SageGod
August 28th, 2004, 01:36 AM
Did anyone notice the lights in the building say DD?
defcombeta
August 28th, 2004, 01:42 AM
the backgound while stylised does not match the way you have rendered the character i think, some details into the building, window details, cracks etc also masony work that you see in mid age american tall buildings. these would give a sense of place to the whole thing.
john mac
edit: by the way this piece shows your skills better than the blade peice, good job.
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