Girl - perspective - advise?

[skinns]

Hey I'm working on a perspective exercise, along with working on my anatomy as I didn’t realize how bad it was until I came on here. Suggestions, comments, anything outstanding really bothering you at this moment?

Thanks in advance!
http://www.skinwerks.com/candy/conceptart_cigar.jpg

[Tetsuo]

sup skinns :)

I think that the elbow joints are throwing me off a little bit. In particular the left arm (her left arm) seems very awkward. The elbow just seems sooo huge! Perhaps shaving it down a little bit will give it a better depth.

I may be wrong...but it just seems a bit odd.

[skinns]

Yeah I agree. I think in that her arm would almost be a little back.. Sheesh I wish my girl would pose for me....arrrg..

[Stormdar]

her hand coming towards us needs to be much bigger. iin the real world your hand roughly covers your face in size. Go ahead and exaggerate, it will looks cool.

Also give the arm a slightly different angle so we aren't looking exactly straight down the axis. just a little is all that is necessary.

~S