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Bimdog
August 23rd, 2004, 11:59 PM
this is a finished oil painting i did inspired by a friend who rides bikes. im thinking of doing some more in this style, cars and such, anything with speed. what does everyone think i can do to help the next ones to be better? what quality would you rate this one?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v57/dfarishstudio/bike.jpg

Kenny_Callicutt
August 24th, 2004, 12:56 AM
amazing work.. The bg goes with it well except for the 3 spots where you decided to use lighter colors.. its like you did it just to make a triangular shape with the light spots or something.. they distract from the important thing.. the figure on the bike.. tone them down some.. add a bright reflection coming off the muffler/helmet or something..

AntonW
August 24th, 2004, 01:15 AM
wow thats very nice!
that would be so cool as poster.
You done a great work, and the decals on the jacket are amazing!

GJ

/who am I to comment you?

Bimdog
August 24th, 2004, 05:07 PM
thanks guys, i see what you mean about the white spots, i guess i was afraid it would be too dark without it, but i like the highlight on the helmet or muffler idea. it would be cool to make into a poster and distribute, just a fantasy of mine.

GraphicMaster
August 24th, 2004, 06:19 PM
I love speed. I happen to daily drive a heavily modded import (11.74 1/4 mile time). I really like it. If I saw it for sale in a coffee shop or something I'd probably buy it.

One thing I'd like to see is some hint of the track/pavement. The lack of background makes me think "stock art" Then again I'm looking through that crap all day long so...

Bimdog
August 24th, 2004, 11:15 PM
yes i think thats a good point, i will proably add some stylized form of pavement on my next one. thanks for the help

dingoori
August 25th, 2004, 12:47 AM
lovely!!

are you a rider?


http://www.dingoori.com

Bimdog
August 25th, 2004, 10:15 AM
no i dont have a bike, my friend does and he lets me take his bike around sometimes. but i see a lot of cool bike pictures and stuff through him.