Ice breath

[mcotie]

here's a new one.

Mitch

http://www.mcotie.com/newimages/ice_breath2.jpg

[mtomczek]

nice work! little different style then I am used to seeing from you. Keep it up!

[Fozzybar]

Hey, Mcotie! This is a COOL pic...man, i am funny... I like the part where the ice breath hits the shield and also the humans' posture...though the waist and left leg of the woman looks strange...

How about making the dragon's head more prominent...maybe more black in the mouth or an overall ice-blue tone...it's just there's much going on in this area...

BTW what's with kcotie, the Warpuppy? I think many of us would like to see a new pic from him...

[Landmate]

this has a nice illustrative/narrative quality.. great work.

if its an ice dragon perhaps all the black lines should be softened and/or turned blue

[MindCandyMan]

Hey Mitch...ok you always want people to tear into your stuff so I will try to give you what you want...I will put on my super critical hat (I have to because I love your stuff so much)

The dragon concept is really cool...but there are some problems with his neck area. His neck doesn't seem right to me. His lower jaw also seems too wide open...seems like there is no bone structure there. The frost that this dragon is spewing is cool but the stream looks weird. It looks strange how such a little stream would come from the back of this huge dragon's throat...especially since he has his mouth wide open. I would picture a lot more frost coming out...I think it would make it more effective. The frost looks kind of lame right now. The girl hiding behind the warrior looks strange to me. The pose seems unnatural...I'm not quite sure why but it just does to me. The warriors upper body looks good except his lower body seems a little thin to me. I feel like his hips would be thicker and the same with his legs. He looks rather scrawn in the lower body. The dragon's left hand looks really weird too it looks like he only has one finger...maybe he does heheh. As far as the composition...it seems kind of cramped...back the camera up a bit and I think it would be really good...just seems to cramped right now.

Ok all that having been said with my super critical hat I am taking it off. Looks totally awesome mitch...great great stuff. That dragon....rocks!!!!!