old contest entry

[neble]

This was just the finished piece that I did for the CGNetworks contest, Machineflesh. I picked it apart after I submitted, but a little too late. I think I might of had the tunnel vision thing going on. I would love to hear comments on how it could've been improved.

http://www.schastudios.com/images/Zend.jpg

[nofingers]

well....when i think of flesh...i think red. I think that it is a beautiful piece, but i personally would like to see a wider range of color...a splash of red i think would help..but the idea and execution is awesome

[FuT]

This picture is awsome but i would change couple of things. Like nofingers said it could use some other colors. And about the body what is hanging down it could use a head then it would look much better, like a upper body of a man hanging there, searching something. Oh, and the floor could use some more details infront, its way too blury.

Good work and i hope my comment helps a bit.