just another kid on the block(UPDATE)

[spawnie]

hi guys n girls,
seems that a lot of newbies are comin to this forum lately, so i thought i jump on the bus n stop lurking around:)
this is my latest drawing,it´s the concept of the maincharacter for a shortfilm i´m gonna do in 3d this year.C&C welcome.
hope ya like:

http://silber.monoid.net/spawnie/DREAMMAKER.jpg

[keyth]

awesome! very nice indeed!!!

[Fozzybar]

Wow! What's on with this new guys? Targete, Marko, you and all the others...i guess more great talents are lurking here...take off your masks and let's see some awesome pieces, like this one!

[killing.people]

very sweet. i love his name, does he make dreams? that would be swift.

-killing.dreams

[spawnie]

keyth: thx a lot!
fozzybar: thanks for mentioning me in the same line as Targete.i´m really honered cause i´m far away from being that good:)
killing.people: yup, he does but he´s not really happy bout it.. that´s what the story gonna be about.but it´s still under development, so shhhhhh...;)

[davi]

that's awesome :)

[ioptics]

What a great looking character, I love it! I look forward to the development of the story.

[Yaseck]

Yeah! That is gr8! I love this guy (sorry i'm heter 100%). :-) He's head is awesome. And that BIG nice nose.

[Groady]

This is a very insperational piece. Think I'll have to try something of this quality soon! :D

[Smeagol71]

Fantastic piece! Thanks for sharing it and welcome to the boards. Can't wait to see more!

[spawnie]

THX guys!happy that you like him.gonna post some more characters
as soon as they are ready:)n just to be
an ordinary newbie: i really love this place!

[spawnie]

hello again.
sorry for reviving this old post,but it´s still the same topic, so...:D
this are the other characters for my movie.would like to hear some C&C:)
the girl should look cute but not too beautiful n the helper should be usefull n kinda funny.tell me what ya think:
http://silber.monoid.net/spawnie/DM_GIRL.jpg
http://silber.monoid.net/spawnie/DM_HELPER.jpg

[davi]

very cool :)
i got not crits!

[I.was.ink]

They are all nice characters. I think they all fit their personalities just like your described them. Good luck with your movie, and keep posting on concept art!

[spawnie]

thanks guys.seems like i´m on the right way then;)hopefully i can get them
as good in 3d.

[Smeagol71]

Hey spawnie, great work. Your execution is flawless, just have one crit on a conceptual side for the helper/robot. Do you think it would be helpful to make it a little more personable? I don't mean add eyes, some kind of face, etc. I think that would ruin the good idea you have. Perhaps you could make his legs a little longer, give him a bit more height? Give him some kind of gears or valves on top to balance him out, give just the impression of a face? Something to make him look a little more goofy without being too funny as you said. Just a thought.

The girl looks great! Really nice! She kind of reminds me of a part Winona Ryder would play, lol! Haunted.

Like I said, both ideas are great and are rendered well, just my thoughts.

[Marwood]

Very nicely illustrated images and well presented. I especially like the posture of the second figure, very pouty. The only crit I would venture is that the raised hand of the robot seems to be back-to-front, in that, the thumb is on the wrong side. Apart from that, great work..

[spawnie]

Smeagol71 - thank you very much:) you might be right with that he needs something like a face. i thought that the rings where the arms come out may look a littlebit like eyes but it seems like that doesn´t work that good. gonna thing bout that but i don´t agree that gears or valves are right because that would destroy the idea that the helper is symmetrical from almost any angle.
Winona Ryder? - hmmmmmmh...gonna think bout a liveaction part in my movie;)
your thoughts are always welcome:)

Marwood - same thing as i said to Smeagol maybe would answer that: the intention was to make him symmetrical, so the hand is almost the same from the other side.beside that, i don´t think the thumb is on the wrong side, cause if he would put the hand on the ground, the thumb would point at the thumb of the other hand...and if it does not...he´s able to flip it;))))))
thank you.

[Marwood]

sorry i assumed that it was the top of the hand facing the viewer....

[spawnie]

no problem:)