Humanity Ending

[kyliegirl]

I dont really care if ppl like this or not. It was out of my dream (yes i dream in colour). I had this strange dream of how all humanity will die by a giant bacteria thing and the ocean flooded the cities. i happened to stand over a cliff to look over the edge to see such a city buried in water. and this girl came along who created the two moons.... ANYWAY.. onto the pic

small version

http://opticpower.com/kylie/miniver.jpg


for the larger version to see better details etc go here

http://opticpower.com/kylie/domain/theendofworld.jpg

[Spacemanchuck]

So are you the horse???

Ok, firstly its a bit dark on the lower half of the image, even more so on the lower right side... In all the image looks unfinished, thats the biggest crit.

The moons actually look really nice, I also really dig the clouds, so u should be happy with that! But, really I liked ur discription better than the execution...

I suggest detailing up the city, if that horse is u detail that up to, basically bring out detail in the places u are wanting your viewers to be looking at(points of interest, make'em "POP")... And maybe u could put the chick in there to fit with ur discription.

All in all, u could have a very nice painting here, just needs some work...

[dem0n]

So are you the horse???
hahaha :teeth:
I like the idea, but then again dreams mostly are cool.
the hard part is to put em on paper without trying to MAKE it look cool and adding lotsa shite that weren't actually in it. (ok that's good sometimes too but spoils the actual content :p)
too bad you didn't paint the bacteria, would have made it a little more interesting.

1 question, what's with the horsie? :)

[no skillz]

looks kewl, i like the clouds, the moons look good too, maybe its just my monitor, but the horse is red, is that supposed to be? i thought horses were like,,,,, not red (i dont know jack about horses) yeah the sunken city should be more detailed,,,
if you dream through the eyes of a horse how do you tell your a horse, unless theres a mirror in your dream,,,, or you look and see your hooves (sp?) i suppose,,,, the story you have going with it is pretty kewl

[kyliegirl]

i wasnt the horse. i seen that horse along with a few others along the cliff..

i aint much of a good drawer with people. and the bacteria thing i came across on a strange chinese roof thing. somewhere else. dunno if i will draw any more out of my dream. this was the one part of my dream which inspired and moved me the most. thus why i drew it..

thanks for the crits. but i am happy with this picture. it turned out how it was in my dream. there for i feel its complete. i wouldnt want to add so much detail which i didnt notice much in my dream.

the horse is a red chestnut. you can get reddish horses