Gort 2004 ? - not really,

[teh fonx]

Concept pice for a personall project of mine with the dubious title of "What if Meteors Prevail" a sort of 50's sci-fi spoof. This is one of the characters featured in the game (its a computer fps) At any rate, still not quite finished, need to put a bit more thought into certain mechanisms (like the arm retracting spools and work on the upper part of the landing gear). I'm also aware of the issue with the claws. So having said that any C&C is welcome :)

http://www.w-i-m-p.net//Concept_Art/Monsters/Robot/robot_open2.jpg

[emily g]

Hey, I really like the wheels under your character! I think this needs a little bit more clean-up. Your lines are still sketchy and it's hard to see the mechanical details. Those details should be tight and crisp. Your curves also need a little finesse. Have a nice clean curved line instead of multiple lines.
I know you're still working on it. I'd like to see another version when you do it up. Keep going on it.

good luck!
emily

[teh fonx]

thanks, i think like most novice artist i still have to work out my line, as far as the details, well, im just covering up my inability to really draw technicall stuff, but its defeneatly something i need to start taking seriously, at any rate apprecaite the comments, and hope you guys keep them comming.