quickie

[Kress]

tried to keep it loose and quick.
http://www.dropship1.com/art/beastie.jpg

[I.was.ink]

good job kress. i think it'll be no problem for u getting into art center. i recently met someone that graduated from art center. he posts his stuff on here. I like the looseness of it! keep up the good job!

P.S his name is byam!:)

[Fozzybar]

Odd...the face is awesome and dynamic...but the body is static and the fact, that you just rendered the left breast side disturbs me...

[Kress]

wow fozzy you're pretty sensitive.
thx iwa

[Fozzybar]

kress...due to my lack of english i can't assess your post right...was this meant ironical? Was my comment to harsh?

:confused:

[Fozzybar]

hmmm...what i meant was, that the breast looks like an egg, because the rendering ends exactly with the outline, so the human eye seperates it from the rest...if the rendering would fade into the other parts it would look more consistent...it's more a matter of composition...

[chudzta]

its ok fozz, u didnt say anything out of line here.. its just odd that the farther one is rendered.. it really stands out.. mayb if the closer one was done and the farther only slightly it would look betr, either way good loose style, i likey it

[Kress]

Aaah, OK - I get you guys. Thanks for pointing that out. Like I said, I did this quickly and tried to finish it without going back on anything. But thanks for pointing that out - cuz I really like the loose way sketches look, but I have to remember to make sure it's communicating/reading right.
Chud is right Fozz you didn't say anything out of line. In fact, despite being a "non-English" native, your second description was quite clear. Glad you like it, thx all.
Maybe I should fix the sketch so the chest is clear!

[Fozzybar]

Ok..i am glad, nobody get hurt :)

I just used a easy way to see problem zones to show you what i meant, though you already understood...maybe an image tells more than thousand words...

http://www.cleverfool.de/ca/beastie_kress_editfozzybar.jpg