Right is Right

[MankindRam]

Hello,

Hello my name is Rich A. Molinelli and I am a little nervous bout posting as the level of talent here is pretty amazing. But I wanted to introduce myself and say hello to everyone here. I have been pencilling comics part time for about 2 years with my first FULL comic debuting at Wizard World Chicago in 5 days time! Well these pages are from a new venture I'm doing called Right is Right! Enjoy! and C&C appreciated.

Ram

http://www.mankindram.com/Images/Seqs/RIR-CC-Page-1.jpg

http://www.mankindram.com/Images/Seqs/RIR-CC-Page-2.jpg

http://www.mankindram.com/Images/Seqs/RIR-CC-Page-3.jpg

[Shark Attack]

Dude welcome.. your sruff is really good i like it a lot you shoudnt be nervous about posting. but the one thing i noticed is that in the frame where a bunch of dudes in capes are sstanding around the shadows are all going different directions like the all have an individual light source... and if there are multiple light sources then there needs to be multiple shadows coming from the people.. Hope that helps

[BlueMech]

Looks pretty solid so far. make sure to post final versions!

[MankindRam]

Shark - Thanks man, yeah we noticed that once we went to inks and I believe it was fixed then. Thats what I get for drawing at 3 am.

Blue - Thanks man!

Ram