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Travism
August 3rd, 2004, 05:50 PM
Hey all, Im getting ready to graduate from art school here pretty soon and wanted to get some feedback on my stuff!

http://www.travismanley.com/images/3d/10.75-full1.jpg
http://www.travismanley.com/images/3d/12-full1.jpg
http://www.travismanley.com/images/3d/11-full1.jpg

these are some early renders of a sceen I am totally revamping.

http://www.travismanley.com/images/3d/10-full.jpg
http://www.travismanley.com/images/3d/5-full.jpg
http://www.travismanley.com/images/3d/6-full.jpg

I'll post the new renders soon, if anyone cares.

there is more stuff at www.travismanley.com

bigesta
August 9th, 2004, 09:14 PM
Where the new stuff man. I want to see the new stuff. I want to see the temple that you built and stuff man. peace adam

bigesta
August 12th, 2004, 07:50 PM
hey travis why isn't there any of your character concept stuff up on your webpage. and where the new stuff

Travism
August 13th, 2004, 12:14 PM
hey thanks for all the replies. Its all going up soon, I am just about finished with that project I have been working on for the last couple months. I want to wait till i finish my portfolio and I will just upload pages straight from that.-hey send me your email address.

gasmask
August 17th, 2004, 02:32 PM
you might want to rework these before having them in your folio, the textures are stretched on alot of places and seem to look like you just used photos for textures, also when modeling dont have any sharp or jagged lines breaking up the background with the forground, make smoother transitions and add more details to areas of interest like the tree.

Travism
August 17th, 2004, 03:16 PM
hey thanks for the feedback, I couldnt agree more with you, I have redone all the textures and remodeled pretty much everything in that environment. I have learned a lot in the last month or so. I'll post the new stuff as soon as its finished.