Don't be gentle with me...

[Amurayi]

Heya...

got my Wacom and Painter today and did my first sketch with it.
Let me know what you think and don't be gentle. Thanks.

http://www.lemonbutter.com/concept/pix/bat.jpg

[jasonarthur]

fuzzy picture so it's hard to tell much about it.

-- J

[chozometroid]

The jpeg compression is really ruining this. I don't want to crit, because it's hard to tell what it originally looked like.

[emily g]

Yeah, it's a little hard to read. It looks like there's a shadow behind the bat. If he's just flying in the sky, there would be nothing for a shadow to be cast on to.
Where is the light source coming from? The highlights on the bat are cool in temperature, but they are on the wrong side to be coming from the moon. If you want light shining on that side of the bat, I would make it yellow so you know that it's not coming from the moon--possibly it's from a window or some kind of outdoor light.

best,
emily