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EndTurn
July 26th, 2004, 12:40 AM
Had a craving for drawing someone doing a flip... no explaination aside from that. I guess its really Phil Hale inflenced, compostion and content. Id appreciate any C&C, anatomy issues, colors, whatever.
http://www.jesseturnbull.com/flip.jpg
flex mathews
July 26th, 2004, 01:30 AM
nice piece...i can definitely see the phil hale influence.
i can see a few problems though. it looks pretty good anatomically except for the foreshortened leg; its kinda small and the angle of the foot is off. the color looks pretty good. i like the relfected blue on the shirt and sock, but i dont like the strong orange in face. tone the orange down a bit. the shirt is probably the most distracting for me... pay closer attention to where you use line and where you dont. also the shirt needs to obey the laws of gravity more.
EndTurn
July 26th, 2004, 02:58 PM
Thanks a lot, I appreciate the feedback. The shirts gravity defiance hadnt occured to me. It was done from ref, and I twisted and turned the ref around to get ther position right. So yeah Ill need to tweek that. And I agree with the shirt being a little sloppy.
Warhead82
July 26th, 2004, 05:02 PM
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