Pencil concept..

[Joey-b]

well dunno if this is gonna be colored or anything..
so for now.. there finished...
C&C most welcome
http://img39.photobucket.com/albums/v120/joeyb/PL_small.jpg
http://img39.photobucket.com/albums/v120/joeyb/Mushroom_hutbw.jpg

and the last one.. badly damaged by scanning.. :(
http://img39.photobucket.com/albums/v120/joeyb/watchtowerbw.jpg

[Tag06]

These look pretty cool, the mushroom house kinda reminds me of the Smurfs.

[Elwell]

The ginormous scroll signature and dates are unecessary and distracting.

Be careful of those uniform outlines around everything. Line weight can be used to convey both volume and atmosphere, and you're missing out on that. For instance, the setting sun in the second one looks like it has big slices taken out of it, rather than being covered with whispy clouds.

[Joey-b]

thx for ur comments.. and yes i heard that before :).. smurfs rule the world i guess


as for the signature.. ill remove that as soon as i color m.. and if i dont color m.. ill remove it when i use m XD..

the line weight.. yeah ur right.. specially the sun.. aargh.. but i had the most terrible paper in the world.. if i was gonna erase it would become on big blurry spot.. so twas 2 late for that.. i was just a little xperimenting.. thx for criting on that.. i have to watch that

[emily g]

I like these. I could see them as backgrounds for a cartoon. I notice that you are drawing the contour lines thicker and the internal lines thinner, which is good.
My favorite is the mushroom. Good composition. I like the rocks in the foreground. I agree that the sun should be toned down.
I like the house, too. The door and the little well are nice. The building seems to be leaning slightly to the right, which is bugging me.
The skull is my least favorite, maybe because I can't tell what the focus is. Is it the skull or the treasure? The skull has so much detail, that it draws your eye and you almost don't notice the treasure.

good job,
emily