dualwield and girl

[brb]

hey all, heres something new i did. the first one took quite a while to make... about a whole day i guess... anyway c/c pls=)

http://www.instituteofmedia.com/stanley/sketchdump/dual.jpg
click here (http://www.instituteofmedia.com/stanley/sketchdump/duallarge.jpg) for a larger version of it...

http://www.instituteofmedia.com/stanley/sketchdump/blue.jpg

[I.was.ink]

wow! they r both really nice pieces. I really like the first one. I feel a little weird around the hips of the second one. Good job though, I hope u post more!:thumbsup:

[John P.]

I may not be the right person to crit these images, but...

Here goes:


First of all, the overall impression is that these are very good.


My second impression though, is that there are a few anatomical problems. In my opinion,

¤ His left hand is huge.

¤ Not sure if I'm right about this, so correct me if I'm not, but aren't those shoes he's wearing made so that the crease there separates the big toe from the rest? If so the crease is too much in the middle. If not, forget I said this... :o

¤ Her hip looks too wide for the rest of her body.

¤ The fingers on her left hand(her left hand, not the one on the left to us) are too short and too thin, and especially the thumbs on both hands.
The fingers on her right hand(again, her right) are too similar in length. Put your own hands together like she holds them, and you'll see.

I'm not sure about the other things I was going to mention, because I think you're following a style that I don't really know much about, and perhaps they are meant to be that way in this particular style. Those things are that the feet seem too big(but it could be a perspective thing, and as said, it could be the style you're trying to follow), and it's the eyes, which seem too big, and too far apart(same reservations to my crit applies here).


BUT.... I do think these are very good. But maybe need some work/tweaking. :)

[brb]

i know the girl is littered with anatomical problems... haha too lazy to fix it though... as for the hand of the first one, i actually meant to make the hand big... thanks for the comments=)

[Dreamed-Reality]

One thing that get's me with the girl is her shorts... it uh, *cough* looks like she has something in them. I think the highlights need to get kicked down from them, because it looks like her crotch is sticking out...