PartyClown(nudity)

[Molly]

This has taken me fo ever. Dunno how long...all PS
Crits&comments welcomed....

PartyClown....
http://img19.photobucket.com/albums/v57/Tekura/PartyClownFin_TM.jpg


Mollyx

[skvv]

nice idea... kinda creepy (is the chick there of her own volition?) kinda reminds me of eyes wide shut.

I'd say anatomy is pretty good, but the stomach looks kinda flat for the posture, and it might do some good to add a second light source but not too bright because the darkness of this piece makes it.

[jasonarthur]

she just back home from a long day of kid's birthday parties (lucky kids).

Nice, moody work. The lighting is well done and I don't think I'd add a second light source, as the previous poster said the lighting makes this piece.

That said I think you have too much light hitting her...uh...shaved region (not her head). Considering the light source that area of her should be a little darker (but don't get too carried away...there's perverts that pay good money for this sort of thing :arcfreak: ). heh.

good stuff.

-- J

[Android]

wow, im disturbed and kind of turned on is a sic way,
good job molly-

[rambhat]

Nice piece Molly. Is there a story behind this piece? I'm sure I can make assumptions but I'd really like to hear your intentions. Again, good stuff. No crits here.

[davi]

:bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow:

[Arwar]

oooh, great one molly. The skin tones are really nice. But what is she sitting on? It looks like skin, and I think I see a breast in there. Disturbing :eek:

[Main Loop]

this is a really provocative piece.. its best left up to the imagination whats going narratively, so i wont ask.. the "unclean" look of the fleshtones adds more of a creepy mystique.. compositionally it feels a bit unbalanced and heavy on the right.. i dont think id want anything in that space though.. maybe just needs a subtle hint of her left leg under the knee.. either way, its a succesful piece

[amateurateverything]

i'm speechless...in a good way

[Android]

well as far as a crit goes, i think the relfected light on the shaved vagina could pick up more warm color from the organ like chair, and the overhead lighsource could move into a cooler temperature spectrum for contrast.

.......actually i just really wanted to use the words vagina reflected light and organ in the same sentance

[klid]

OY! sweetness, i agree there could be more warm reflected light on the vajajay. but yeah clowns are sexy.

[maddness]

it turns me on and gives me a craving for cotton candy at the same time... :btu:

seriously though, i do like the way this is presented... What were your thoughts behind this piece if you don't mind me asking?

[Molly]

Hello Fellas,

Thanx ever so for dropping by..
Story? Whatever you like...This was from an A5 biro sketch I did back in April, after A'Dam, cant remember the inspiration...
jasonarthur - would you let her near ur kids? thnx for the crit man, her 'shaved regions' IMO could do with some better highlighting, originally I wasnt gonna make it so dark, but hey, follow wherever the pen takes you...
rambhat - cheers man...just let ur imagination run away...
davi *mooowah!*
Android - thanx for dropping by, much appreciated and ur crit too. Colour and lighting wise, I just threw it down and hoped for the best (not a good way to start) but ur crit is well noted - and ur poetic use of words...lol
Majestyx - dude! - "vajaya" i read that word and cracked up, aw man - you guys are fascinated with her vag...
Maddness - maybe I'll add a looong stick of candy, just for you?

Thanx again for the crit (and props) I'll go a way now put 'em to work...

Mollyx

[Somnio]

This piece is awesome ... it evoked an immediate emotional response, very moody as the previous posters noted. As far as crits I think your mostly in the clear except for her right hand. To me it seems slightly masculine, however that may be a product of the angle it's rendered at or perhaps my own case of temporary down syndrome ... you be the judge.

Stumbled uppon a great smiley for the "pervs" you forspoke of ... :dance: