Woman in corset...need feedback *update 3*

[andreasrocha]

Hi there

I present to you one of my last works. What do you think? What can be improved?

http://andreasrocha.no.sapo.pt/conceptart/Bust.jpg

CYA

[BlueMech]

I think her breasts should be squished together more since she's wearing a corset...

[Mirre]

I think the body, including breats looks really fine. I mean... look at the size of them... they weight something too. Besides, that corset is even open where the breasts would be "squished" together if it was tight there. A normal corset would push your breats upwards though. Anyways... The body looks great. But the face needs some more definition. You have this great contrast on everything up to where the neck and the face mends together. That needs more, and heavier lines. Her face also looks a bit slanting. Like if the mouth, and nose are directed one way (right), and the chin and eyes the other (left). Her fringe also needs some more definition, like shadows under it, and a little shading. Great drawing!

[andreasrocha]

Based on comments from forums and friends I made a couple of improvements. Now that I compare this new version with the old one, I can see how wrong the face was (something I did not notice before.) It's funny how involved you can get with a painting up to a point where you cannot see errors. Probably, this second version also has mistakes I am not seeing, but that is why I need your feedback.

Thanks!

http://andreasrocha.no.sapo.pt/conceptart/Bust2.jpg

[Spartan]

Ok - that's like, 1000% better!
I think you need to look at her eyes next - one is circular, and the other is oval - make the on eon the left look more like th eone on the right...

[islander]

Well done. i have no complaint other then the fact that i like longer hair. awesome job,

[RefrigeratorCo]

The head is too small for the body and the shadow that her nose is casting is too pointy and geometric. Also, you should spend more time making the hair more realistic so it goes with the face, which is excellent.

and... other then that it's looking realy good.

[andreasrocha]

After considering some of the comments, I thought it would be better to head into a different direction, so I tried a more spontaneous approach. The woman was becoming too "plastic" This is what I came up with, but it is not finished. I am curious to know what you think. I believe that most of you dislike this one compared to the last. Do you think I should rework the last version or go on with this new one?

Thanks for everybody's comments. They help a lot...

http://andreasrocha.no.sapo.pt/conceptart/Bust3.jpg

[E.A.S]

in this last one the shoulders look wrong.. like they'e too far up..or her boobs are to far down..or maybe both :p nice pose and face though..better than I can do in digitial.. :afro1:

[andreasrocha]

OK...I think I got it now. Comments are still welcome. And then I'll put it in the finished pieces section.

http://andreasrocha.no.sapo.pt/conceptart/Bust4.jpg