Tunderdome drawing

[Lionel]

I don't think I am going to have time to finish this :/ but incase I do I am interested in hearing peoples thoughs. Not the best drawing in the world and the scan is lousy :/. Kinda feel a bit disaponted with it.
http://raq626.uk2net.com/~lionel/term2.JPG

BIG!!!!!! Version (http://raq626.uk2net.com/~lionel/term1.JPG)

[Dreamed-Reality]

That's pretty cool!

I like it but the proportions seem wrong on the mans' face, and too bad there is a giant fold down the middle of the paper...

Anyway, I hate to critique pencil drawings, because once it's on paper people hate erasing, but yeah, my only complaint is the proportions on the face of the man.

I love the shading on the womens sleeve!

[John P.]

Wow - this is so good, and at the same time....not so good... http://home.online.no/~johmoe/smilies/erm.gif

I don't think you'd have to do too much about the terminatrix, she looks good to me, but Arnold could need some work.

Hard to tell exactly, but his anatomy in this is not the way he spent years building, to put it like that. ;) :D

I think the pointers I would give is that

¤ His forearm is too thin, and too "same thickness all the way up".
¤ Upper arm(with biceps) should be a bit longer too, I think.

¤ His hand looks to have only three fingers.

¤ I don't think his neck muscle would bulge exactly like that.

¤ His upper body below the arm there should be more to the left, IMO. Maybe not if he's leaning over, but...

Lately for some reason I've been confusing left and right...! I meant it should be more to the right, but perhaps not if he's leaning over. I think we'd see more of his "boob muscles" than in the drawing too.

Perhaps his head isn't too big after all after you've fixed those things.


I found these pics of rather strong guys arm wrestling, so you've got something to compare with/reference from.

See how their forearm looks?



http://www.williamsmith.org/image7SA.JPG


http://www.theharley.com/boogie/2001/events/images/front2001_3.jpg


http://www.davedraper.com/draper-bill-smith.jpg




Hope I've been to some kind of help. http://home.online.no/~johmoe/smilies/erm.gif :)


I wish I was as good at pointing out the flaws in my own drawings, but I turn blind after having worked on them for a while... That's why it's great to have places like this. :)