beat 'em up character

[gekitsu]

hi there.

in a german forum, some of us decided to design their own beat-em-up game characters and make some kind of art battle (=drawing the own chara beating the hell out of the enemies chara)

i used this as an opportunity to play around and try some new things.

here is my design, critics are highly recommended.

http://www.polycount.com/cottages/gekitsu/pimp/beatemup-chara.jpg

base is a pencil drawing with a heavy color treatment by painter 6 on top of it.

greetings

raphael

[Fozzybar]

The coloring is nice, but the head is off...or the neck is really long! Also her left arm/elbow is disturbing me...look at her horns. Compare the spaces between the horn and the eye on both horns. The horns are not at the same level.

[gekitsu]

thank you a lot, fozz.
lots of those things one doesn't see when staring at the pic for too long.

wioth neck/head: i got this issue told in different forums. i tried to go for that vicious look with neck bent forward and head looking up from below but graciously failed :)