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Frank the Ninja
June 27th, 2004, 02:24 PM
Finished! but a sketch? I don't know. I was told to put it here.

http://www.ninja.oceansend.com/completeire.jpg

skvv
June 27th, 2004, 04:09 PM
pretty good... the style looks borrowed from other places but a few things bug me about the concept...

A. are ninjas really anarchist? considering all of the scheduled rigorous training they go through.

2. wouldn't a person who had a free-hanging tome have some sort of clasp attatched to keep pages from flying out all willy-nilly

and

C. the pose looks very dramatic but i think the magic hand effects should be coming from the other direction, because right now they suggest that he was twisted up even MORE than now to come to that position. (and the flame effects look borrowed from dragonball, sry.)

i'd say the pose is my fav part about the piece, and his hair as a cover for his face.