Children's picture book

[Hone]

I've been working on a short picture book for pre-school and early elementary school aged kids. Not all the pictures are complete, but the incomplete ones do have rough grayscale sketches in place. I'd be interested in any and all comments, suggestions, crits, etc. either here or by email to me. My email link is at the top of every page. There are 14 pages.

It is password protected and located at http://www.eyewoo.com/bam/index.html

usename: bam
password: coldkitty

Merry Christmas...
Pray for peace...

[Coma]

I wish I had a tail.

[foster]

That is marvelous! I enjoyed the hole story and the character and life your brought to Bam. Kids, i think, will love it too.

Thanks

Jon

[Sadclown]

awesome man. Very very cool. When is it going to be published?

[Groady]

Very nice! I like your style for this, seems quite different from your other pieces. :)

[ODIN SIX]

I do not know ,, but to me childerns books seem to be hard to do..
I like it :)

[Hone]

Odin... to do them and get them published is VERY difficult unless you have an agent or are a celebrity...

It is a very competitive business and very hard to break into, but I'm going to try... and try.... and try...

[Seung Ho]

I really would like to see you succeed with the book and the illustrations. Good luck! Great stuff too btw ;)

[Hone]

Thanks Seung Ho... That is also my greatest wish! :cool:

Love your work, btw. Super stuff!

[Cellbound]

i really enjoyd that, took me away to another place for a few minutes, i love that about childrens books. My fav book when i was little was 'Whacky Wednesday".
I think the best childrens books, adults enjoy too.

all the best with this book!

[MindCandyMan]

I especially love the icicle, icicle, icicle, tail, icicle...great work man...keep it up...I can't wait to see it in barnes and noble.

[Adam]

pgs 9, 10, and 11 made me laugh out loud - the illustrations are way too much fun, great work!